Today was our crit where were had to show our final design to our class as well as receive questions and feedback from our peers and tutor, John about our ideas and how we got our final design. I thought the crit went well as we were able to explore the process of design and information to our class and we were able to backup and link information we found to the design. We were given various feedback about the layout, text and positioning and how we could improve parts of it.
I enjoyed the process of looking at other projects other groups created as it gave me ideas of things that I could possibly look at or create in the future.
Once the crit was over, we decided to act upon the improvements and suggestions in order to improve our work. We did not have too much to do but the suggestions given, helped us refine our work further.
To finish off the day, we projected our work on to the glass in order to see how our final design would look. We were given a large sheet of tracing paper to tape onto the glass so that the projection could be see easily. However this did not work due to the way it was laying of the glass and it looked uneven. To revolve this problem we used individual sheets of tracing paper and taped it onto the glass which looked much better.




I was quite happy with the final outcome however, the colour of each section did not show up and well as I wanted it to be. To resolve this, next time I would have liked to increase the vibrancy of each section more.