We had a good crit, we were able to show three visualisations and received feedback based on our ideas.
I received feedback, as expected on the visualisation I created. They also mentioned about showing the data in a different way which I agreed with. I do not think it was the best way of showing the data, considering it contained different information.
Furthermore, we were in more ideas on developing the frequency of three categories interface by possibly merging the shapes together, to form more of connection between the data.
Our last interface received good feedback, we wanted to add further information to it so that it’s more informative.
Improvements:
Later on decided to respond to the feedback and add to our designs and make them accessible on the web :
Visualisation 1:
https://projects.invisionapp.com/share/JXJURS4HGQ9#/screens/300288028_IMG_5651
I decided to show the movement of data that travels through each point. Each number corresponds to the location and frequency of the email to reach its goal. It will inform the user of the journey it takes.
Visualisation 2:
https://projects.invisionapp.com/share/JTJV8LU3S6B#/screens/300323682_IMG_5657
To improve this further, the data has been moved closer together and a home and arrow button has been added to create more interaction.
Visualisation 3:
https://projects.invisionapp.com/share/2WJVBTKA5DY#/screens/299787933_Desktop_HD1
To improve this, a hover effect was added to give you information about specific incoming emails. Additionally when you hover over a city with the mouse it displays the list of all the emails that have been received from various brands example Amazon.
Overall I think the feedback given was necessary as it has created and developed the understanding of the interfaces.